Very skeptical at 31%

Not sure on this one, it's far from being anything deep and meaningful, but has been at least a little entertaining so far.
It's about a nerdy high school kid who realizes he has supernatural powers(super strength and speed that sorta thing). Weird part is he now see's these "vapors" emitting from everyone he sees, and he can use his own "vapors" to control the other persons emotions.
I wanted to touch it, to make it mine. A wisp of my own darted from me and latched onto one of those seductive vapors. Tickled it. Her's curled, stretched, and wound itself around mine in a lovers embrace.
Yeah, needless to say I'm a little skeptical about how this is gonna play out.